Tuesday, October 28, 2014
Do I want to ride my first roller coaster?
My family and I were on our way to Six Flags, Dallas.When we got there my dad asked”Do you
want to ride your first roller coaster ever?”I clenched my jaw and mumbled “I’ll think about it.
I was thinking about it for 2 hours.My tongue swelled up and now my hands got REALLY sweaty I had finally made my decision,I confronted my parents in a soft voice I whispered “ya sure” with a small frown they couldn’t see.He stammered “WE HAVE TO GO RIGHT NOW!” He grabbed my hand and darted like Usain Bolt across the parking lot.He had gotten jumpy when he charged inside.I really wanted to recommened NyQuil for him, so he could fall asleep.When we went inside of the amusement park he told me “We have to go to the Texas Giant.”A minute later we were on the cart sat down,pulled our lap bars down,and it yanked us.As we climbed up the wooden roller coaster it came to a sudden stop “AHHHHHH!” We had some twists,turns, and some drops so it was over in about a minute.This was a wild adventure and I’m glad I made this decision.
-Payton
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I LOVE the choice of "clenched" at the beginning! I wish I had more information about the ride itself! You did a great job of creating interest at the beginning. Could you elaborate and paint a picture of the time on the roller coaster as well? I want to know more!
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